Don't get me wrong, this page is absolutely stunning (as your stuff always is) but since you asked...
I'm still working on my own action technique but I reckon some mangling of lineart (in place of putting in action lines if you don't like that sort of thing), some well-placed motion blurs at varying opacities and flying embers (since this is fire we're dealing with here) might add some movement.
But I feel a little blushy telling you how to do anything really lol
Зайчик мой, Ты такая талантливая <3 (I GOOGLED SOME RUSSIAN I HAVE NO IDEA HOW TO EVEN READ THAT) you continue to whoop ass with your bodacious comic and characters and colors. UwU The sound effect on the fire is really clever and so are the design of the animals hhhwww <3<3
I love how Shawn has a way better sense of self preservation than Dorothy does. She just sees the world as happy and like nothing bad is going to happen. So cute.
average rating: 5
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Xamag
how do you action
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Lina
I think you do it pretty dang well imho! That last panel is just so great ahhh <3
rufiangel
Don't get me wrong, this page is absolutely stunning (as your stuff always is) but since you asked...
I'm still working on my own action technique but I reckon some mangling of lineart (in place of putting in action lines if you don't like that sort of thing), some well-placed motion blurs at varying opacities and flying embers (since this is fire we're dealing with here) might add some movement.
But I feel a little blushy telling you how to do anything really lol
Chivi-chivik
It's better to make some motion lines instead of blurs in this case. :)
LMB
It looks great! Something tells me that she might be a bit naive lol.
cattservant
Could be and is diverge in the woods
Erupan
Зайчик мой, Ты такая талантливая <3 (I GOOGLED SOME RUSSIAN I HAVE NO IDEA HOW TO EVEN READ THAT) you continue to whoop ass with your bodacious comic and characters and colors. UwU The sound effect on the fire is really clever and so are the design of the animals hhhwww <3<3
Xamag
Stop being so sweet arghjjksf
Erupan
nnnnnhhhhuhuhu no bb<3 ;u
Reader
Hhhhhhhh this is so kick ass and I love how Dolly is so gentle and loving. You don't get many well written but genuinely caring characters anymore.
DecoyDreamer
AAaaaah...this is awesome. Shawn is a cold hard baddie.
Minchan
Only hugs, Shawn! :<
And Dolly <3 You're so adorable >w<
Victor
Shawn, you are a bundle of sticks, straw and cloth playing with fire. You should put it down and get the butt out of there.
Black Legacy
Yeah that's nice Dorothy.
But i think Shawn's got the right idea here maybe?
PandaRum
Hugs - the hippie answer to all of life's problems.
Fractal
Headcannon: Shawn has an Irish accent.
DecoyDreamer
I actually agree with that! >w<
BAKAnnabubs
Wow I can actually hear it now.
King
I love how Shawn has a way better sense of self preservation than Dorothy does. She just sees the world as happy and like nothing bad is going to happen. So cute.
???
Shawn is the coolest scarecrow ever.
neuroticAlien
I second that
Ech
That flow of the fire tho
DecoyDreamer
And let me guess...Nick comes to the rescue??? Because if he does, were gonna see some wood-choppin' action!
KatieM
I love it!
Scarlet
I may or may not be romantically attracted to a scarecrow
neuroticAlien
That makes the two of us
average rating: 5